Food Belief
My food belief is"Eating Chinese cabbage for half of one year keeps doctor away. It seems to me that is a good food belief. It is fact that every year my grandmother plants a few of Chinese cabbage., and almost every day my family eats Chinese cabbage. I think I keep a good health. In medicine, Chinese cabbage has very high nutritional value. It cantains protein, dietary fiber, vitamines, and lot of trace elements that body need. Finally, Chinese cabbage has good effect on people's health. It can reduce the incidence rate of brease carcinoma. It can also soften blood vesseel. The end, for many women, It is a good food to lose weight. All in all, Chinese cabbage is a kind of good food, and this belief is right.
Oh, really! I haven't heard about cabbage before. It seems to me that it's very, very healthy for our bodies. I always put cabbage when I do a salad. So I like it. :)
ReplyDeleteHi old Yang
ReplyDeleteActually,I have never heard that food belief!!
Hi Yang
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely, I think Chinese cabbage is a good food for our heealth.
Hi Yang,
ReplyDeleteWhat's the diference normal cabbage and Chinese cabbage?
If I ask me, normal cabbage is also good for health :)
Hi Yang
ReplyDeleteI didn't know Chinese cabbage, but it seems like goot for our health.
I want to try it.
Hi Yang! I'm Chika.
ReplyDeleteI think it is true. but I don't know Chinese cabbage.
I really interested in it!
Hi Tomoyo,
ReplyDeleteI haven't tried Chinese cabbage,but I think all vegtables food good for health.
Rway Alhkeem
Hi Yang,
ReplyDeleteI love cabbage and agree that it is good for you health. When I eat it, it just tastes healthy (like ginger and garlic)!
Here are some grammar errors you might want to look at:
1. I think I keep a good health-->I think I stay healthy OR maintain good health
2. that body need-->that the body needs
3. The end,(FINALLY) for many women, It is a good food to (HELP THEM)lose weight.
Your grade for this assignment is 4/4.
Thanks for sharing.